From: Beman Dawes (bdawes_at_[hidden])
Date: 2001-11-02 15:00:29
At 02:25 PM 11/2/2001, Ed Brey wrote:
>Nice improvement. Here are my suggestions to make it even better:
>- Replace the nested tables with a single table just for the link box,
>set the link box to float on the right. This will allow the page text to
>under the box, which provides more of a publishing-quality appearance.
>'style="margin: 1em"' to the table tag for breathing room.
>- Put each section of the link box in its own paragraph.
>- Replace the '--'s with spaces. A simple search and replace of '--'
>' ' will do it. (Except, don't replace the webbot '--'s at
>end of the document.)
>- Remove the new-line hack regarding "members-only" (little could be more
>against the spirit of HTML). Also, it shouldn't be hyphenated.
>- Change 'site-related' to 'web site-related'.
>Attached is your page with the above changes made for concrete reference.
I like it!
Some of the comments from Jeff Garland and Jon Kalb also apply to your
design, so I'll try to integrate them in too.
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